On this one we can see catering doing one blowjob in 3 rectangles and then Jenna cum, then work perfectĪlso you can give to the commix another touch removing the merges SOMETIMES! No always Here we can see catering doing a blowjob to Jenna and then WHAT? Yeah she is liking Jenna nipples, I mean what? Why to fast where are all rest of rectangles, (you get the idea right, then you going to lose some fans because this simple things because is kinda boring see the commix going to fast without text
This one make to the guy one blow job and have a lot of text and in you commix happened something like this (Clarification lol this one are from animals don’t like me XD) I just take the ideaĪnd this is a perfect to show you what I mean when I say in one we can see Jenna introducing her cock into some one and in the next square she cum and what happened with all rest sequences? That is the sexual thing you need keep alive You don’t need colored the Commix black & white is the best too, you can only colored the first cover page and the last one I think.Īlso this other have 100000 Squares BUT then you can keep your audience more entrainment looking each rectangles and you the users can read and get one fantasy more long with the page like this Look this examples, the first one have 8 Rectangles in a feature you can start another project ( no hanta PLEASE ) hentai we read more at 400000000 and good ones in you past chapter banana Sundance you make something like hentai draw very ugly (
with more sequences like if Jenna going to put her dick into katering we must notice this, no like this one, katering is opening her ass and then Jenna is inside and then she cum, any way don’t despediciate your skills my friend you have a tremendous commix here in your hands do something different to all rest and you going to be one of the best sexual comics ever, then. fill some cake hahaha baking to important things you show be make more rectangles, little big little’s, etc. also I notice when Jenna cum just cum like another commix and in you first chapters Jenna cum like a horse or every time she cum duno. Story, or Jenna pretty face when she is horny. is my recommendation, because you comics looks poor in that point, all rest are perfect, the draw is unique and no other commix have something like this one. Something like this you can expand more the rectangles and do it more per chapter, don’t care if this are smalls you can add more images or text into them. and in the next chapter Jenna is already inside Katherine, but what happened with the rectangle where she is putting her dick inside? we just see the dick inside and then she cum every chapter are like that very fast maybe you can try expanding more the chapter and the rectangles or doing the rectangles more smalls then you can put more in a chapter. I notice you always on each chapter make the rectangles very fast happened, I mean in one Rectangle you can see Katherine open her ass waiting for Jenna introducing her cock inside KAT.
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